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Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional




Blanch desolate face rotting from reality,
pessimistic eyes,
hinder the disguise.
The vacant mind.

Transgress demise.

Despondent affection,
stripped-less anima,
vehemently demoralized.

The misery,
a parable affection.
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~soulharvester Oct 30, 2003, 6:39:25 PM
nice details... nice poem...

nice job... :p

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*nihilim Oct 30, 2003, 7:33:56 PM
Haha. dA fucked with your shit.

AND YEAH I MEAN THAT IN EVERY SENSE OF THE SIXTH.
YEAH.

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~undesireable Oct 30, 2003, 7:47:17 PM
what the fuck? I'm bored, so I'm going to pretend like I care about what you said. enlighten me.

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*nihilim Oct 30, 2003, 8:30:41 PM
Nothing, really. dA messed up your description. There's a space in it. That's all.

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~fallenaskari Oct 30, 2003, 10:15:38 PM
or was it a typo? or perhaps intentional?

i dunno, nor do i really care, its a good poem anyway

first and last bits are the best i think

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i dont want to bleed anymore...
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=kagrmom Nov 3, 2003, 7:15:03 PM
Hard hitting as always.......you must dig very deep for the words to describe the mask that we all must wear.

Great job!..........:hug:

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mari



A man's home is his castle.....let him clean it........anon
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